Mr. Salsich
English 9
4/6/11
Paragraph 1
TS: Cassius says people are "masters of [our] fates"
CM: hard topic to discuss b/c it can be true and not true
CM: it depends on what your trying to control
CS: I believe we can in some ways and cannot in other ways decide our own fates
Bell words: Control and Decide
Paragraph 2
TS: there is ways in your life to decide the outcome
SD: deciding where you work
CM: working hard in the particular subjects for that job (engineer = math + science)
CM: be a good student
SD: there are points in life when you have to pick one thing over another
CM: choosing the type of car you want is an example of this
CM: you want to have the best car to keep you safe, but also have a nice look
SD: I'm a believer in karma which can effect your fate
CM: doing good things for others like lending them a hand will only bring me good later in life
CM: if mean to my piers then bad things will happen to me
CS: you can decide your fate but only until a certain point
Paragraph 3
TS: there are certains things uncontrollable by us in my eyes
SD: sometimes our fate is put into others hands
CM: if you need surgery, your putting your fate in a doctor
CM: if the doctor messes up your life is on the line
SD: sometimes I ask others what I should do
CM: I can't decide so I like having others do it for me
CM: usually only do this with things not that important though
SD: sometime no matter how hard you try at something, you won't always get what you want
CM: I would love to be a basketball player, but I'm just too small
CM: I play ever day, but my chances are very slim
CS: whatever happens in our lives is not totally based on are decisions
Paragraph 4
1) I wish I could decide everything about my life
2) It's not all entirely in my control though
3) if we could decide our own fates completely, then everyone would be happy
4) this topic is based on opinion though, no ones really ever right or wrong
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